Blog Reviews

1. Pensamientos    
              
        I thought your peter pan post was great because I think it's really creative that you wrote the song yourself, and the lyrics turned out very good.

2. AyeBeeBeeEWhy

        Your christmas haikus are cute and fun to read, it helps me get that feeling that christmas is near.

3. Creative Writing- An ability you have to learn 

         "The things around you" was one of the best things I have read on any of the blogs so far. It had the most meaning and was just different. I really enjoyed it.

Sweet

The steel has not made me cold

Nor the stone made me hard

Nor the gray made me colorless.

The dopefiends have not made me scandalous

Nor the cops made me hateful

Nor the hateful made me heartless.

The food has not killed my appetite

Nor sexlessness killed my desire

Nor lifelessness killed my thirst.

They gave me no water for my garden,

Gave me sand for my seeds,

And I grew flowers

And low fruit,

Enough to color the walls

And make stale rice

Taste sweet.
- Martin Williams